I was walking down the road heading
to the dairy there was some wet concrete in middle of the pavement I thought I’ve never felt concrete
before so I jumped in the middle of it it was deeper than I thought .I was sinking. I dropped my coins I was going to buy a ice block with .then noticed a
little red pipe sticking out of a ladder that was put up against the house
beside the pavement. So I grabbed the red pipe and pulled myself up with it as
I was pulling myself up I heard someone screaming help!help! I realized there
was a person up there so I quickly let go ,silly me .
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