Wednesday, March 13, 2019
100WC-#24-Emma
It was Saturday morning and I woke up to get some biscuits. Everyone was asleep so I thought it was fine. As I crept to the bench I found a trail of crumbs guiding me to the bench then saw the empty biscuit container, and heard some shuffling in the container. I ran as fast as possibly could to bed and lay awake in the black room and dozed off. When I awoke I went to the kitchen and saw a mouse in the biscuit container and said "Empty. What a surprise!" So I was scared of a mouse, I'm so embarrassed now.
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