Nearly about to fall down I stand on my tiptoes and grab anything I can reach, ¨got it ¨ I yell as Olivia catches a small little red box that fell from the pantry.
¨YAY CHOCOLATE¨ we yell. We open the package as if it was Christmas morning.
"That looks weird,¨ Olivia said holding the little brown cube that has chunky stuff in it.
"Mmm let's eat,¨ I replied not knowing it was Oxo beef stock cubes.
"But it is the wrong colour!¨ Olivia said in shock.
"Who cares.¨ I say as I put the chocolate in my mouth,¨That's not chocolate¨ I yell as I spit it right out!!!
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