Thursday, March 28, 2019

100WC week 26 - Ruby



Abby scrambles we’ve been waiting so long for this we setup our bedding and I say shall we go play in the tree house  and she say yes now we’ve been playing in there for at least an hour  so we go inside and get some lunch we have sand witches  they were so good.  Then abby’s mum shows up saying she needs to go home today but they stay here for a little bit  my brother says he’s going to cut the ladder so it doesn’t work my brother did mean it he did he was  just showing off but I was so cross that he did that.

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