“Mum Alexis is being mean to me” I scream in anger
“Stop it I am getting annoyed”
I feel as angry as ever so I go and tell mum to tell her to stop and nothing happens
“I am so angry just stop it please”
And I go in my room and do some of my homework in till Alexis comes and bugs me again
Then I go I was so cross that I start to scream then she starts to hit and it became a big disaster
but in the end we are all happy again.
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