Sunday, March 10, 2019
100WC - Week #24 - Isabella
Boom, bang! Lulu was walking down the street when she notices a street light was flickering. She turned around to find a man standing there staring at the light. So she walked over to him and said “What on earth are you looking at?” Then he looked at her and he whispered very softly “You need to get out of here before the package arrives. Go! Get out of here!” So Lulu ran as fast as a cheetah home. When she got home there was a box for her she opened it but it was empty. What a surprise!
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it was really interesting,detaild, and good!
ReplyDeletespooky but cool
ReplyDeleteIt was pretty good. Try to put words both before and after the phrase.
ReplyDeletethat is very cool i like it alot
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