“Wake up honey it is time for school” Mum asked tiredly. “Hurry I am tired get changed already” demanded Mum.
“Okay, okay, I will get up” I say while pretending to sleep. I get up make my bed, get changed and go out to make my lunch. First I put in my chips and muesli bars then I try to sneak it into my bag.
“Remember your sandwich” Mum says in a hurry.
“WHY ME” I say disappointed.
I go get the bread and get the Vegemite and tip it all in the bin and then trick Mum and say, "The Vegemite is empty. What a surprise!"
But mum answers “ I can buy you some now”
“NOOOO!”
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