Ding Dong, ¨who must that be,¨ groaned Jenny as chips spat out of her mouth.
¨I'll take one more chip and….. Ding Dong “Okay, Okay! I'll come¨ shouted Jenny. As Jenny was opening the door she felt a peculiar feeling shiver up her spine. Squeak
“I've got to get this door fixed, I'm so useless,¨ mumbled Jenny. In front of Jenny she saw a fabulous present ¨Ohhhhhhh what's that, is it for me?”
“It's so sparkly I may as well take a little peek,” but the present was empty. What a surprise!
¨I'll take one more chip and….. Ding Dong “Okay, Okay! I'll come¨ shouted Jenny. As Jenny was opening the door she felt a peculiar feeling shiver up her spine. Squeak
“I've got to get this door fixed, I'm so useless,¨ mumbled Jenny. In front of Jenny she saw a fabulous present ¨Ohhhhhhh what's that, is it for me?”
“It's so sparkly I may as well take a little peek,” but the present was empty. What a surprise!
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