I was online shopping for my bratty niece, Keira while she was at the mall with her sister, Alexis getting presents for her birthday. I saw the most beautiful teddy ever it was pink and fluffy with a white stomach, “Perfect!” I exclaimed while adding the toy to my cart and smiled wide.
About a week later it arrived in the mail, I didn’t want to look at it yet because I wanted to be just as surprised as Keira. Two days pass and it’s her birthday! I take the toy to her house and the house in covered in pink decorations! “Wow…” I mumble to myself I give the present to her and she tears it open right away she starts crying but it is the wrong colour! She screamed “Oh no!” I say it’s fully brown!
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