Argggg! what happened the tv fell on me when I was playing it hurts what should I do get it off me hurry up argggg!.
Why do you take so long to do something I can't do it because it is so heavy. I was so cross that I almost through it off me myself on my own.Why is so heavy im so angry argh hurry up mum I yelled.I think i broke my arm it hurts a lot.And then finally it is off me my arm is broken lets go to a&e medical centre. By Laine
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