Monday, March 25, 2019

100WC-Week #26-Brooke


“Argggggg! I yell.
As my brother scurried off with the inflatable ball, and jumped into the pool.I scurried after him, I then swam under him and grabbed the ball from underneath but he held onto it so tight that it would not budge.
I was so cross that I ran after him and pushed him into the pool.I’ve got the ball, well not now.As I watch my brother dive back into the pool with it tight in his arms.Me and my brother kept playing on and on, that in the end we started laughing out loud, now I wasn’t cross at all.


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