I’m walking through the abandoned museum with my best friend. Every step we take it makes a huge creak me and my friend Abby scream like we're getting sucked up into a vacuum . We run across the checkered floor boards to the stairs we run up the stairs we hear footsteps but that's just Abby trying to freak me out. I smirk "really Abby I’m so scared" but I really am . We're up the top of the stairs on the second floor we see a moving pillow so I grab it and throw it back down the stairs we realise It's just our Mum's trying to freak us out .
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