I wake up nice and early ready to go to Legoland.I look out the window and the sky is red I climb down the ladder of my bunk bed and tell Kate to get up.I go to my desk and grab some coins because i´m gonna buy a big teddy for my bunk.When we get there I want to go on the first ride I see because it looks so cool.When I get on the ride I feel water coming up to me I quickly realized that i'm sinking I yell for kate but she doesn't answer what will I do?
Thursday, March 7, 2019
100WC-#23-Emma
I wake up nice and early ready to go to Legoland.I look out the window and the sky is red I climb down the ladder of my bunk bed and tell Kate to get up.I go to my desk and grab some coins because i´m gonna buy a big teddy for my bunk.When we get there I want to go on the first ride I see because it looks so cool.When I get on the ride I feel water coming up to me I quickly realized that i'm sinking I yell for kate but she doesn't answer what will I do?
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