We were going to the house to get our stuff packed. So we can move to the new house I have not seen it.So I am excited to see it for the first I beat is really big and it has a candy machine. And it is made of wood and it has no candy in it that is my guess and then we get to it and is so old and it is going to be boring.So I need to get some stuff to keep me from being bored ive got my brother.So that will be good.
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