Tuesday, March 26, 2019
Week #26 - Biankha
I was lying peacefully in bed half asleep beep ,beep my alarm run though my ears, I flung out of bed shut the alarm off . I was so cross that I screamed ,really why!!. I run to the bathroom and put my blonde bleached hair in a ponytail . I then stormed down the hallway and put my ugly black comfortable sandals on ready for school.As I sat down on the couch my mum screamed” what are you doing sitting down you have a lot of stuff to do and they are not fun stuff .Come on hurry up. I just did all of that.(with a smirk on my face )
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