My dad is going shopping today for me and I told him to buy me a nice black and white baggy t -shirt. He said he will be about half an hour. Uuh! my Dad is home I wonder if he got the right one because he never gets anything I tell him to get. Gross, a brown and green t-shirt. But it is the wrong colour, it should be black and white . Dad "whoops, there was no more in the colour you want so this was the only one, don't you like it."
"Well it’s alright I guess" and from that day I never wanted to take it off.
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