When I got hired from being a sailor member and when then i saw the biggest ship it is color red, white and more. When it was the next day i went to the to go to my job i went to the streets and went to the side of the pavement with the buildings and then when I arrived I climbed up at the ladder and went to hunt more treasures just to find jewelry like gold coins, a golden crowns, royale jewelers and more. When we saw the spikey dangerous rock the co-captain sailor quickly turned the ship and it was too late and the ship is sinking down and we got rescued but no golds again.
Wednesday, March 6, 2019
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harvey this was a neat story just work on your vocab and your i
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