Monday, March 25, 2019
100WC - Week #26 - Olivia
"Ahhhhhhhhh" "no this is so unfair why did she get the part of the play I worked so hard really wanted to be queen Victoria but i'm just a tree I even rehearsed the part 21 times a day i'm so frustrated". "calm down lily calm down I said as I fell silently on my bed I ran to mom and told her everything" "I was so cross that" LILY shouted mum that's enough for now I know you practiced but life isn't fair so deal with it OK I yelled I just really wanted the part i'm just so upset so I stormed of and never came back.
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