¨Um Sally I don´t think this is a good Idea this place has been shut down for years now¨ murmured Mia.
¨Don´t be a cry baby think about this, this place could be ours but in secret¨ explained Sally.
¨Hey look, a candy bar the lolly´s look so good my eyes are glued to the candy can we have some Sally please¨ Mia said with drool coming out of her mouth.
¨NO we don't know how many years they have been here for!¨ boasted Sally.
Too late Mia had already eaten half the candy and is throwing up on the floor.
¨Told you not to eat it¨ teased Sally.
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