Wednesday, March 6, 2019
100wc 23 week Abbie
Today gens dad is putting some pavements down and he has already done it. They are wet but gen doesn’t know so she steps on them and starts sinking and gets stuck, because the wet stuff is dry so her dad has to get a ladder to pull her out. but he spills red paint on her and tipped out her coins that were in her pocket, so then he had to break the pavement with the ladder but it didn't work so he had to get a concrete breaker. and that worked so then gen got out but she still had red paint all over her and she was not happy about that, she was also not happy about her coins cause now she has none. gen really needs a shower but the water was off she was mad.
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wow abbie so funny but try add some full stops and apostrfys love olivia
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