Wednesday, March 6, 2019

100WC - Week #23 - Olivia


“We finally made it to the temple” puffed Brent
“oh we did” replied Brenda “what is this red brick on the wall she questioned”
“ Don't touch it” yelled Brent
“whoops “Brenda smirked
“what's happening cried Brenda”
 they suddenly appeared in a room with three doors and one ladder “remember we are only here for ancient coins wait a sec”  whispered  Brent “
“we're sinking quick climb the ladder OK ” when they climbed up the ladder they found pavement at the top “wait we're back at the top again “sobbed Brent “ I guess we have to do it all again!!!


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  1. AnonymousMarch 11, 2019 at 8:13 AM

    I really liked this piece because how you described what you were doing in the temple. Maybe you could try adding more detail to this piece because I didn’t understand what happened in between “they suddenly appeared in a room”. What happened before the temple? Nice piece by the way.
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