Tuesday, May 5, 2020

100WC-Week 32 Aiden

We were walking home from school when all went pitch black and we disappeared into the night.  In the darkness, we somehow entered the wrong house.  Everything was quiet except the news was still on.  The whole city was getting destroyed.  We left the house and went outside, and ran towards the noise, but should we really do this?  Finally, we saw what was damaging the city.  It was MASSIVE. It had 8 hairy legs and fangs dripping with venom and it was running in our direction.  We didn't know how to stop it so we made a run for it...

1 comment:

  1. Oh gosh! That's some scary story. I hope you would survive it and be the hero to save your town. Well done!

    ReplyDelete

I really liked . . . because . . .
I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .

I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
Think about adding . . .
Have you thought about . . .
To improve your . . . try . . .
Perhaps you could . . .