It was a dark and stormy night, We were going hunting as normal when a ‘Bang!’
They're here……. They emerge from the darkness,
When they show up it’s impossible to run away.
We tried a million times before, but it’s hopeless.
We’re always going to lose someone to them, even if we beg for mercy they still don’t care,
It all started 2 years ago when we were allies, the leader of their group wanted to be the Ruler, the boss. We said no and now here we are.
…we disappeared into the night … trying to escape, no hope……
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