Wednesday, May 20, 2020
100WC-Week #34-Aiden
There was this day when a box came out of the sky and as it was falling I could hear something rattling inside BANG! It fell on the ground everyone around me stopped as they heard the box CREEK open and something was inside. We all hid as a racoon came out of the box, Wow we all said it was just a racoon. BOOM! The box exploded and something was coming for us. Leaves were falling out of a tree, one leaf fell and shattered it was like a piece of ice. Everything that the army touched would shatter to pieces or turn into a massive monster.
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