Sunday, May 17, 2020
100WC - Week #34 - Kenneth
I was laying down on the fresh green grass. Looking up at the sky, wondering how clouds were formed. I caught a leaf, and chucked it in the air, watching it float down like a balloon. I heard a weird rustling sound, coming from a box. I looked inside only to find a Racoon in it. I immediately run inside away from the vast creature. I put a chair on the door so the raccoon couldn’t get in. I looked out the window, then it jumped on the glass making me frightened that I fell on the floor. The raccoon ran away, never to be seen.
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