¨Well what kind of camp guide are then¨ someone said angrily.
¨Ok everyone ¨said the camp guide¨let's turn back¨,but then I said¨we can't, cause we are lost deep in the forest¨.I turned back and no one stopped me. I start walking then some one was screaming then I hear more screams
then...The deafening screams echoed through the cold night... fright filled my body and I started running . I saw a light and I got close enough to touch it, then puff…?
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