Wednesday, May 20, 2020

100WC - Week #34 - Milah Hood

Racoon!
The sky was clear tonight. A leaf  fell on my windo-.
๐•Šโ„‚โ„๐”ธ๐•‹โ„‚โ„ ๐•Šโ„‚โ„๐”ธ๐•‹โ„‚โ„ ๐•Šโ„‚โ„๐”ธ๐•‹โ„‚โ„ goes something outside my window.  
I am going to INVESTIGATE!. I said in my head like an idiot. BANG!.  Goes the chair  as i walk into is. 
โ€œPlease donโ€™t wake up, please donโ€™t wake upโ€ I say to myself. I look through the ranchlighter, its the box. I open the door as quietly as i could so i would not scare this creature (and my parents) . 
I tiptoed out outside on the cold concrete. I reach the box. I slightly open itโ€ฆ
โ€œAhhhh!โ€ I scream โ€œRACOON!โ€


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