Sunday, May 3, 2020

100WC-Week #32 Alex

Creeaakkk went the unstable floor boards as I walked across the second floor then… I heard  someone down stairs
I saw a spade in the corner of the room. I grabbed it  well at least I think I did. I waited every second I heard the clock down the stairs going. Tick tick tick.
I see the spade again this time I grab it then I think...but should I really do this?... then I think again  I should do it for my own safety.
When I swing back I'm greeted with a cat then we leave the horrible house.
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  1. AnonymousMay 12, 2020 at 2:04 PM

    Good job Alex Keep it up
    From Charlie

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