Wednesday, May 20, 2020

100WC - Week #34 - Joe

WOO!! This is fun. I'm flying bro in the sky! I'm going a little bit down to the ground. WOO-Ahh stupid leaf! AHh boom! Ah my head, wait where am I??... uh hello?... omg this is so spooky! Uhh what the heck why is there a chair in the middle of nowhere.  Hissss..AHH A RACOON! Wait oh comn it ran well it's scared then. Hey a house I should ring someone. Uhh there's nothing, all there is just a stupid box! Oh comn Well I'm out! Ok where to now? Hmm O a ladder that's my way out!! Hopefully

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