As the sun came down, a terrible howl made the world shake. The deafening screams echoed through the cold night. Of those who had been bitten, by the creature. He lurked around the forest, those who faced his wrath would regret even thinking about it. It was the Coma world, whenever you got unconscious you’d teleport there. Usually I see people now and then. But they just disappear. The Creature would chase you around, if you got caught. No one knew what happened. But they see what happens.
Sunday, May 10, 2020
100WC - Week #33 - Kenneth
I’ll tell you a story, a story about the long dark night.
As the sun came down, a terrible howl made the world shake. The deafening screams echoed through the cold night. Of those who had been bitten, by the creature. He lurked around the forest, those who faced his wrath would regret even thinking about it. It was the Coma world, whenever you got unconscious you’d teleport there. Usually I see people now and then. But they just disappear. The Creature would chase you around, if you got caught. No one knew what happened. But they see what happens.
As the sun came down, a terrible howl made the world shake. The deafening screams echoed through the cold night. Of those who had been bitten, by the creature. He lurked around the forest, those who faced his wrath would regret even thinking about it. It was the Coma world, whenever you got unconscious you’d teleport there. Usually I see people now and then. But they just disappear. The Creature would chase you around, if you got caught. No one knew what happened. But they see what happens.
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I just don't have words how to explain how amazing your story was,that creature sound like something out of a horror movie.
ReplyDeleteIt was felt like I was in the story.