Monday, May 25, 2020

100WC - Week #35 - Charlie

This dog is down in the river with his owner. There are lots of trees just beside the river, and there are lots of rocks in the distance. The dog is a dark orange. The water is very calm. All the grass is very dead. It is very shady  and there is a big patch of blue in the sky. All the trees are dead. I think it might be in the South Island. The dog is a very big and a ittle bit small. Dogs like water alot.  The person who took the dog is very good and nice.

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  1. Mrs PMay 31, 2020 at 11:33 PM

    Hi Charlie
    You have written a factual 100WC describing what you saw in the photo. This is an interesting way to approach the challenge. Using short sentences adds to the factual writing. Well done.
    Mrs P (TEam 100WC)
    Wellington, New ZEaland

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  2. AnonymousJune 1, 2020 at 2:40 PM

    Hello charlie!, I really like your story. you used some good words in that story! keep it up

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