I was sitting on a chair in the woods, it was a clear day and the sky was blue. I saw a box sitting under a tree, so I went and I saw a racoon curled up inside it. Why is there a racoon curled up inside a box in the middle of nowhere? I thought. Just at that moment a leaf floated down from the tree and landed on the racoon. Then the racoon jumped up in fright and ran away, well that was odd, I thought. I walked back to find that my picnic was gone. What? I thought.
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