Sunday, May 10, 2020

100WC-week #33-Ella

The deafening screams echoed through the cold night as I walked through the cemetery. I felt spooked, fighting and sad. I Was sad for the people that have died.but just then omg that was paranormal. Then i started  to run home so fast that when i got home i couldn't talk. I was so puffed from running.Then i told mom what happened and she did believe me. And we had dinner and pudding and then mum said dose enny one want to watch a movie? Yes. After the movie mum tould me teeth and bed good night every one.
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