Sunday, May 3, 2020

100WC - Week #32 - Madison

My brother and I were at a really big theme park, when we 
spotted a giant ferris wheel.
“Can we go on it,” said my brother.
It looked really exciting ...but should I really do this?... 
What if I vomit at the tippy top, what if I fall out of 
the seat thingy, what if…
The possibilities were endless! 
As we lined up to hop on I remembered the chocolate milkshake 
I had half an hour ago. 
Oh, boy did I regret that!
“Could you please board the ferris wheel,”
This was going to be the trip of a lifetime!

1 comment:

  1. Hi Madi,
    Well done on your writing this week. I love how you used your personal voice in your story I can really tell that you wrote it.Perhaps next time you could try replacing some of the words in your story for and example "We were at a gigantic snow mountain". But overall well done.
    Keep on writing,
    Bailee

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