Wednesday, August 15, 2018

100WC special prompt #4 by Hayley.

The Fight.

¨ Why would I do that?¨ I yelled, ¨ Answer,  Why would I do that!¨
¨Because you're my sister and sisters help sisters, don't you remember?¨ my younger sister Jade asked.
¨How could I forget,  you know we can't forget we are the knowing the best of the best and you are trying to kill us all with the forgetting,¨ I replied.
¨Well Taylor maybe you don't know everything I do, like how Mum was the one that killed Adam and have you seen all of the deaths I have?¨
¨Well of course not.¨


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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousOctober 16, 2018 at 1:53 PM

    Hi Hayley

    That post was one of the best I have ever seen you had an excellent use of speech marks and very eye caching [hard to foul]

    great job Hayley

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