Sunday, August 12, 2018
Special Prompt #4 - By Leena
I went to go outside and I saw this chicken and It looked really sore so I had a look at it and dad said "why did you touch it." I said "just to make sure that the cut isn't deep." It was not really deep so I went to help fix it up and Dad said not to push to tight so I didn't push to tight so then Dad said you did this way too tight. I said no I didn't so then he said just leave it alone then so I did and then I took the prickles out of the lawn and dad said "why did you do that" and I said because I can. Then I did and then Dad said ok good bye and I said ok.
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