NOOOOOOOO!!! I can't believe that she did it I thought she was just joking I never thought she would do it OHH!! SHE'S IN BIG TROUBLE.
My worst school enemy Bella took my pet snake Slither I know she hates snakes but why, why other than me being her enemy. ¨I guess she just hates you¨ said Sally.
"I guess so" I said. "Maybe we should find out where she's hiding it?"
"Why would I do that?" Sally said.
¨I don't think it's a good idea Amy."
¨Ohh come on, you're not scared of Slither aren't you?¨
¨Ahh no? Ohh okay I am."
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