There I am waiting for my Mum to pick me up from school. It was so boring waiting for my Mum so I went and played on the school playground until someone asked me “can you push us on the basket swing.”
“Why would I do that?” I said back to them.
“ So we can go higher” they responded.
“It is against the school rules” I said confidently.
“Fine” they said in a sad voice. I played on the fling fox for a little then I went back to the bus stop waited a little, then my Mum arrived.
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