Friday, August 10, 2018

Special Prompt #3 - Charlee

Once upon a time there lived a small village named Clockington.  Clockington had a big blue flame right in the middle of the town that everyone loved and worshiped regularly.  The did this because the heat from the flame keeps the ice from getting in and destroying everything they know and love. But the ice was slowly sneaking in and ruining the lime trees, Clockingtons most loved thing since the ice age.  The only normal way to solve it is to… get more flames. But that did not work and the ice did destroy everything.  So they built a giant clock called Big Ben to protect the last flame and the clock is still around today.


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  1. I really liked how you said the flame protected them from the ice that would destroy everything.

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