Friday, August 10, 2018

Special Prompt #3 - By Lucy


¨But MUM PLEASE!!

 AND I PROMISE I WILL NOT HURT HIM!!¨

¨NO I mean what I say AND you will set set him on flame¨ aaid Mum

Mum never makes sense I always wonder why she talks like that. Its weird.

¨Fine I'll set him in ice then!¨

¨THERE IS NO WAY YOU ARE DOING ANYTHING TO OUR POOR DOG!! NO WAY¨

¨But-¨

¨NO BUTS OR IFS OKAY!! Go and pick 1 lime please only 1!¨

¨FINE¨

¨Whats the time?¨

¨Go and look on the clock!¨

I regularly have to go and pick the limes for Mum.

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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousAugust 12, 2018 at 4:07 PM

    I really liked this because there is a lot of excitement and arguments to the story, good job.

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