Wednesday, August 15, 2018
Special prompt #4 - By Notch
… i was still crying when my Dad died and I cant sleep from my Dads dead body I found in the living room. After a while I saw a camera in the living room and I told my mom what was that camera there. She said it is for safety and the control room was in the other side the hallway, i opened the door and saw my Dad's dead body. I ran for my life, then I said to myself "why would i do that?" And I never saw my Mum ever again.
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