Wednesday, August 22, 2018

Special Prompt #5 by Blake

I get out of bed and go down the stairs to the kitchen and make myself a brew of coffee and walk into the living room and sit down. The doorbell rings and then some mail comes through the flap so I get up to go get the mail. As I picked up the letter I saw that it said urgent and as I read the contents of the letter, I was aware of the smile on my face. But I keep reading and the smile turned into a frown. My eyes went from happy to sad, my parents were in an accident, they are...    

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