Monday, August 13, 2018

Special Prompt #4 - By Laine

One day me and my friend Liam went to a cliff. It was massive. We went back home to get changed into our swimming gear. "It is going to be so fun" I said to Liam. "Yeah boy." We ran back to the cliff. Now there is so many people here. My friend looked over the edge, I pushed him off. "Why would I do that!" I said to myself. "Oh no  are you alright" I yelled to him, seeing if he is alright. "Yup all good, I'll be up in a second" Then when he got up we went home.
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