Wednesday, August 29, 2018

Special Prompt #6 - by Notch

... I'm getting nervous about this riddle then I heard this riddle on the internet and the answer was river. I rushed upstairs to my room and then I saw a small river going through my room. For a second I thought it was fake, instead it was real. One of my sisters is very sad because she does not like the pink muffins dad makes and he cooked a delicious macaroni and cheese so i went outside and I saw somebody who was famous. It was Jake Paul and i just fainted.

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