I walk nervously up the stairs, down a hall then in the door of my parents room. In their room I saw a picture of a river. Then mum called from down the stairs ¨Sweetheart dinners ready come wash up, it's nice cooked pink steak.¨
¨Fine, is Finlay home yet I want to play some forza horizon with him.¨
¨Not yet he's got some work to do¨ Mum said.
¨Where is he? In town or with dad in hospital.¨
¨ With Dad in hospital to help him leave and come home tonight.¨
That night my dad came home from his time in hospital with cancer.¨
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