Tuesday, August 7, 2018

Special Prompt #3 - By Notch


‘’Whyyy!!! is it so flamey up in here.’’
"I just want ice cream, I wish there was an ice cream truck here, right know,’’
"Omg the ice cream truck is here.’’ I just just sprinted like a cheetah down to the ice cream truck. Then i realise my fav ice cream isn’t there so i just got lime. I got back inside and I looked a the clock  and it was not the regularly time on the clock it the time when a the world is gonna blow up.
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  1. AnonymousAugust 12, 2018 at 4:00 PM

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