Wednesday, August 22, 2018

Abbie special prompt #5

As I flopped down on the couch on a hot sunny day my Grandma said ¨ you should go outside and play¨
¨ But itś way too hot."  Then my Grandma chucked a thing at me, it was a letter from my Mum because my Mum worked at the military and she was away quite often. I opened up the letter. As I read the contents of the letter, I was aware of the smile on my face I was so glad because my Mum was coming back for the 2 week break.  But when we went to go and pick her up there was sad news...

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