Monday, August 20, 2018

Special Prompt #5 Issy M


The Letter
“Mum! Mum! I got a letter from Aunty Lisa." I said, almost yelling.
“That's great honey. What did she say.” my Mum said.
“I opened the letter carefully.”
As I read the contents of the letter, I was aware of the smile on my face.
"She wants to be my pen pal” I say excitedly. “Can I?”
“Yes love you can.”

This was based on a really life story.  Just a couple of weeks ago I  received a letter from my Aunty asking if i want to be her pen pal and of course I said yes.


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