A girl and her friends went for a walk into the forest trying to find a place to camp, until they came across a magic door. They were very curious of what was through the door. They stepped closer. First one of the friends went, they heard a voice from the other side of the door, so they all went in. The other side was so magical, there were huge trees made of solid diamond, they saw mini creatures below. Then they started to shrink to the size of the creatures. There was on creature that stood out from the crowd, he was the one that made the magic door. They tried to get back but they were stuck...
Monday, August 6, 2018
Special Prompt #2 Olivia
The magic door
A girl and her friends went for a walk into the forest trying to find a place to camp, until they came across a magic door. They were very curious of what was through the door. They stepped closer. First one of the friends went, they heard a voice from the other side of the door, so they all went in. The other side was so magical, there were huge trees made of solid diamond, they saw mini creatures below. Then they started to shrink to the size of the creatures. There was on creature that stood out from the crowd, he was the one that made the magic door. They tried to get back but they were stuck...
A girl and her friends went for a walk into the forest trying to find a place to camp, until they came across a magic door. They were very curious of what was through the door. They stepped closer. First one of the friends went, they heard a voice from the other side of the door, so they all went in. The other side was so magical, there were huge trees made of solid diamond, they saw mini creatures below. Then they started to shrink to the size of the creatures. There was on creature that stood out from the crowd, he was the one that made the magic door. They tried to get back but they were stuck...
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