Thursday, August 23, 2018

Special Prompt #5 by Dillan

Tough Travels
It was a another day in the term holidays and a letter showed up and it said for Kara and Dues.  As I opened it and I read the contents of the letter, I was aware of the smile on my face because it was from my best friend inviting me over to his house in North Africa.
One hour later I Hung up the video chat.  Then Dad came in and said ¨you can't go to Africa because you have to earn it first.¨


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